Nelson Mandela (1918-2013)
Today, we are going to continue to analyze documents and begin to organize
claims to support
your thesis.
1.Discuss Docs A, D, E
2.Analyze Quotes (Docs
B, C, F)
3.Organize Claims
(reasons)
4.Select Documents to
Support Your Claims
(“bucketing”)
5.Organize Evidence
1.Discuss Docs A, D, E
2.Analyze Quotes (Docs
B, C, F)
nWHERE: Where is the quote coming from? Is it from a
literary work? Speech?
nWHEN: When was this written/said? Consider the context
of that time.
nWHO: Who is speaking? What is their perspective? What
is their bias?
nWHAT: What is the literal meaning? Figurative meaning?
PARAPHRASE IT!
nHOW: How are these words being used? To persuade? To
inform? What connotations (emotions/images) arise?
nWHY: Why is this quote significant (important)?
3.Organize Claims
(reasons)
nUse the graphic organizer to:
nOrganize your
supporting claims (reasons) to defend your thesis
nSelect documents to
cite evidence (bucket)
nOrganize and cite evidence
(analysis of details)
nDon’t list documents and their contents
4.Select Documents to
Support Your Claims
(“bucketing”)
5.Organize Evidence
nYou must use outside knowledge, not all information comes from the
documents
nMaking an inference from the documents counts as outside knowledge
nUse specific names, terms, events (i.e. proper nouns)
nStay within the historical period
nAnalyze and make inferences from, not restate, contents of the
document
nThis is not a laundry list of documents and their contents
nAvoid quotes, especially passages more than 3-4 words.
nMake sure to return to the main topic of the essay.
nRefer to the actual document/author/subject, not “Doc. A”
nDo not use “I” and write in past tense or past perfect (Carnegie
argued/had argued)
“’Captains of Industry’ or ‘Robber Barons’?” DBQ
Essay Rubric
8 – 9 (Exceeds Standards)
_____ Well-developed thesis that addresses the question (support of thesis is overwhelmingly
persuasive)
_____ Considerable specific and relevant outside information to
support thesis (information from documents and
outside sources is balanced)
_____ Effective analysis of a substantial number of documents (half plus one), refutes counterclaims
_____ May contain minor factual errors that do not detract from
the overall quality of the essay
_____ Well-written and clearly organized
5 – 7 (Meets Standards)
_____ Acceptable thesis (answers
the question)
_____ Some specific and relevant outside information to support the
thesis
_____ Effective analysis of some of the documents and outside
information (explains the significance of the information/demonstrates an ability to make
inferences/addresses and refutes counterclaim)
_____ Acceptable writing and organization
_____ May contain factual errors that do not seriously detract from
the quality of the essay
2 – 4 (Approaching Standards)
_____ Thesis is nonexistent, confused, or unfocused
_____ Little specific or relevant outside information
_____ Little or no analysis of the documents
_____ Problems in writing and organization that detract from the
quality of the essay
_____ Contains major factual errors
0–1 (Below Standards)
_____ Inaccurate or inappropriate response to the question; Little
or no factual information; substantial factual errors
INC (Incomplete)
HW:
1st period: 1st draft of essay & review Unit
2 test
2nd period: Finish Docs A-F and Create Thesis + Claims